Power Outage



Alone at home, candles flickering
Hear the flame burning
Silence deepening, not yet breaking
World at bay, no longer invading
Only the distant swoosh
Of an occasional car on wet pavement.

All is mum, no humming or buzzing
Clock ticking boldly
Darkened street void of lamplight
Energy rising from within
Slow, still, quiet, timeless
Shadows all around, feeling a pin drop
Dog barking from somewhere in the night
Furnace resting, cat scratching
Sirens howling, wind chimes serenading
Thinking, praying, listening, remembering
Wondering, hoping, wishing, dreaming
Clock ticking bolder still.

It’s cooler now
Seeking warmth in the dampness
Slowdown, shutdown, hunker down
Stay away world
Savor these moments
Feeling safe from within
Only the clock on the wall keeps time.

About this poem

Written one evening after a powerful storm cut off the electricity. My family was out of the house so I just sat down on the dining room floor with a candle and started writing.

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Written on 2001

Submitted by annem.33962 on March 28, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAAAXB AXBCXXXAAAAX XXXXXCX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 774
Words 125
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 12, 7

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1 Comment
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautifully vivid and atmospheric poem about a power outage! I love the way you've captured the stillness and serenity that can come with being unplugged from the world. The imagery you've used, such as the candles flickering and the clock ticking boldly, really evokes a sense of calm and introspection.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to consider incorporating some more sensory details to further immerse the reader in the moment. For example, describing the smell of the dampness or the taste of the candle smoke could enhance the rich atmosphere you've already created.

    Overall, this poem is a wonderful reflection on finding peace and solace in moments of darkness. Keep up the great work!
     
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