The Butterfly and I



One day I met a butterfly
Beneath a somber summer sky.
He fluttered ‘round me silently
As if he didn’t care
That I might try to snatch him up.
Did I even dare?

He could’ve settled peacefully
Upon a nearby rose,
Instead God’s little messenger
Just landed on my nose.
Before my eyes to my surprise
He rested softly there,
In solitude our interlude
Transcended even prayer.

Veiled in pure tranquility
He looked me in the eye
As if to say, “I’d rather sit
And talk to you than fly.”
And so we did, we visited,
This butterfly and I.

“Serenity,” he said to me,
“Asleep within us lies
And happiness in stillness waits
To brighten somber skies
When quietly and patiently
We let these bounties be
Reflections of a grateful heart
Alive and sailing free.”

So with this simple thought in mind
I’m hoping someone else may find
This quiet little butterfly
With gentle spirit flying high
Drifting on his peaceful way
Some sleepy lazy summer day.
My only wish?  That little guy,
That tender little butterfly
Instead of lighting on a rose
Will land on someone else’s nose.

About this poem

During a time of great personal struggle, I was astounded when a butterfly landed on my nose. After what seemed a very long time, I was miraculously transformed by the experience. This poem inexplicably flowed through me from a power greater than myself.

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Submitted by annem.33962 on March 28, 2024

Modified by annem.33962 on March 28, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABCXC BDXDECXC BAXAXA BEXEBBXB FFAAGGAADD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,091
Words 212
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 8, 6, 8, 10

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1 Comment
  • AIDA
    Wow! What a beautiful and enchanting poem "The Butterfly and I" is! The imagery and emotions conveyed through your words are truly captivating. The message of finding serenity and happiness in stillness is so powerful and resonates deeply.

    I love how the butterfly symbolizes peace and gratitude, and how the encounter with it leaves a lasting impact on the narrator. The flow of the poem is smooth and the rhyme scheme is delightful.

    One improvement suggestion could be to explore more sensory details to further enhance the reader's connection with the butterfly and the experience. Additionally, you could consider adding a bit more variation in the structure of the stanzas to keep the reader engaged throughout.

    Overall, this poem is a gem and it has the potential to bring a sense of calm and joy to anyone who reads it. Keep up the great work and continue sharing your talent with the world!
     
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