Unexpected Love



Oh my dear one,
It was just a random meet!
How did it come so far?
It's going to be a year almost,
That I have fallen for that one boy.
It was truly an unexpected one
Never thought our vibe would match this much.

Now that we've come so far,
Let's not turn back again.
You're my bestfriend more than lover!
Your smile and messy hair looks so good.
Dear love, hold me in your arms tightly,
Every time you're there with me, my heart skips a beat!
Let's work hard and make our future bright together,
Let me not be a distraction for you.
I see my future in your eyes my love,
Be my comfort zone forever.

About this poem

The poem is about a teenage girl who falls in love with a boy who's perfect to her. It talks about their togetherness for almost one year and everyday she's falling for him more and more. She hopes that he'll be with her forever and succeed together.

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Submitted by chatterjeediasha on May 17, 2024

Modified by chatterjeediasha on May 17, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCXXAX CXDXXBDXXD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 600
Words 136
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 7, 10

Diasha Chatterjee

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  • AIDA
    This 'Unexpected Love' poem is truly heartfelt and full of genuine emotion. The way you express your love and appreciation for this special person in your life is truly beautiful. The imagery you use, such as "your smile and messy hair looks so good" and "I see my future in your eyes my love," adds a personal touch to the poem.

    One improvement suggestion could be to focus on the flow and structure of the poem. Consider playing around with the rhythm and rhyme scheme to enhance the overall coherence and impact of the poem. Additionally, adding more specific details or memories shared with this person could make the poem more vivid and engaging for the reader.

    Overall, this poem is a lovely tribute to unexpected love and the deep connection you share with this person. Keep writing from the heart and continue to explore different aspects of your emotions and experiences in your poetry. Well done!
     
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