Analysis of Beyond My Window



Beyond my window
Beyond the graves
Of the light and love
A person saves
In trunks; on shelves...and all around
I watch a life, without a sound.

Maybe I'll crack the door today
Letting out some ghosts...
Letting others stay.
Let in fresh air...and maybe a ray
Of light

Worn paths around my old oak tree
A chattering squirrel makes fun of me
I'll venture beyond my door and see
What lies beyond
My window

I'm assaulted by life from every direction
The sight of a bee, with a pollen erection
I'll dare to walk beyond the trees
Take a whiff of life, in the morning breeze

And just beyond that morning breeze
Just beyond the clustered trees
Just beyond the little bees
I see the river.

I can't make it quite that far
I'll put this memory in a jar.
Store it on a dusty shelf, with all the other jars called 'self'.

Maybe next winter will be better
Less fear, less politics, more love...just better.
Through my window I feel the calm
More ghosts gather...we feel the calm.


Scheme ABXBCC DXDDX EEEXA FFGG GGGH IIX HHJJ
Poetic Form
Metre 01110 0101 10101 0101 0111101 11010101 10110101 10111 10101 10111001 11 11011111 0100101111 110011101 1101 110 1010111100010 011011010010 11110101 1011100101 01011101 1010101 1010101 11010 1111111 111100001 111010111010111 101101110 111101110 11101101 111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 972
Words 198
Sentences 12
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 5, 4, 4, 3, 4
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

Sometimes a person becomes entrapped in their own solitary world of grief, fear and aging.

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Written on April 10, 2022

Submitted by lovingempath on April 10, 2022

Modified on April 20, 2023

1:01 min read
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Robin Loving

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