Mesmerising Love



He beholds the candles of my life,
Inside the lanterns of his eyes,
That separate his path from mine,
That the demons between us seek to destroy,
They're exhausting the lights of my soul,
Hissing like snakes in his ears distorting the truth of our love,
My soul finds in his heart such relief,
And for a while my enemies vanish,
And everything they made perish,
I find the strenght to rebuild,
His love is an endless rose field…..
The reflection of his pure soul through the mirrors of his eyes,
Even when the sun doesn't rise,
Makes my heart bounce with joy and makes my soul rejoice…..

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this poem defines the splendour of true love in words of happiness and sadness

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Written on October 12, 2022

Submitted by Sarah.Probe.Salama on December 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGHHIJBBK
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 593
Words 121
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14

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