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promise

barbara brignola

February 22 
Free verse
i look
up and see  ETERNITY
in the black between
the lit stars flickering
the promise
of a new space
between the nothingness
of existence
because the hope
of beyond      this world
is a never land
blinded by falling
lights that fade
into the BLISS
that i see
in your eyes at night
when i look
up

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inspired by the night sky

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Written on February 27, 2022

Submitted by barbB on February 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFEGHIJDKLBMAN
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 302
Words 64
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
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