Analysis of It’s Over When You Quit

Charles Edward York 1966 (Saigon, Vietnam)



It’s Over When You Quit

It’s not over when you lose
It’s over when you quit
The fight is is surely lost
When you don’t give a shit.

The boxer is the real winner
For rising from the mat
When the fighter chooses
A life not lying flat.

Rolling with the punches
Comes with every bout
So stick and move real well
And knock the mutha out!

Defeat is not the end
When you rise up again
Keep on fighting forward
And fortune will be your friend.

Copyright © 2023 Charles Edward York
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Scheme A xAxa bcxc xdxd exxe xb
Poetic Form
Metre 110111 1110111 110111 0111101 111101 01010110 110101 101010 011101 101010 111001 110111 01011 011101 111101 111010 0101111 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 710
Words 141
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 22

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Perseverance defeats quitting

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Written on August 20, 2023

Submitted by charlesedwardyork on August 20, 2023

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Charles Edward York

Charles Edward York is an author and poet activist living in Plano, Texas. He’s written over 1400 poems and published 17 books of poetry. Born in Vietnam and raised a citizen in Dallas, Texas, he writes poems that include the subjects of love and relationships, nature, social justice, including police violence against African-Americans and minorities, astronomy and others. more…

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