Analysis of Forgive Me for What I’ve Done



I'm sorry for the pain I've caused,
For the hurt that I have brought,
My words and actions were not paused,
And now it's all for naught.

I never meant to cause you harm,
To bring you tears or make you ache,
I know my actions were alarm,
And for that, my heart does break.

I hope that you can find it in your heart,
To forgive me for what I've done,
And though we may be worlds apart,
My remorse will never be undone.

I'll do all that I can to make it right,
To make amends and ease your pain,
For your forgiveness, I will fight,
And I'll never make the same mistake again.

I'm sorry for the hurt I've caused,
And I promise to make it right,
For in my heart, your love is bossed,
And without it, my world is not bright.


Scheme ABXB CDCD EFEF GXGX AGXG
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (25%)
Metre 11010111 1011111 11010011 011111 11011111 11111111 11110001 0111111 1111111011 10111111 01111101 101110101 1111111111 11010111 11010111 01101010101 11010111 01101111 10111111 001111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 722
Words 169
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Written on March 11, 2023

Submitted by Auliq-Ice on April 04, 2023

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