Analysis of The Proprietorship of Progress: A Sonnet on Seizing Control of One's Destiny



Upon assuming proprietorship o'er one's being,
And from vocalization of woes abstaining,
Portals hitherto unknown start revealing
Opportunities for personal gaining.

For when responsibility is assumed,
And complaints are left unuttered, doors swing wide
To paths and chances never yet consumed,
And all that once seemed impossible, now spied.

So let us take control, and seize the reins,
Of our own lives, and chart our own true course,
For in the end, it is our own domains,
And not the fates, that set our lives' true force.

So let us rise, and claim our rightful place,
And make our futures, with a steady pace.


Scheme AAAA BCBC DEDE FF
Poetic Form
Metre 01010010010110 01111010 1011011010 0100110010 1100100101 001111111 1101010101 01111010011 1111010101 110110110111 10011110101 01011110111 11110110101 01101010101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 617
Words 118
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 122
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

This sonnet is a powerful reminder of the importance of taking responsibility for our own lives and stepping out of a mentality of complaints and blame.

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Written on January 16, 2023

Submitted by Mawphniang.Napoleon on January 15, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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