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Two Shiny Silver Dollars

I went down to the car dealer
As he sent me a car sales flier
But I didn't have any need
To buy any car at this present time 

But I just wanted to see
If I'd won any of the prizes given
That brought me there from my home 
In the very first place
But to my surprise
As I spun
The small round roulet wheel
I did come out ahead

With 2 shiny silver dollars
And did put'em in my pocket 
For alittle bit of my time
From out of my day given
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David Smith More than 1 year ago
Hey I'm ready for Vegas with 2 whole lucky silver Dollars-lol-Dave
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Tameika Evins More than 1 year ago
Great poem.
David Smith More than 1 year ago
Thanks-dave Thats me "A Simple Man's Poet"
Jaimesen Geffner More than 1 year ago
I think this is a piece that has the "catch" to make a good write- the telemarketer that calls.. etc I might suggest.. take the view of the car"sales man" and see what you can sell a reader that will keep them in the parking lot of your own writing! cheers, Jaimesen
David Smith More than 1 year ago
Here here as thanks-Dave
Tom Kennedy More than 1 year ago
Hopes raised and then..........Some false advertising ........
David Smith More than 1 year ago
thanks Tom-dave
Omajean Lewis More than 1 year ago
Reminds me of my husband and his winning at the car lot.
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