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Beautiful Eyes Of Love

I have seen in your eyes
A declaration of love
Your eyes says it all to me
That I'm beautiful
\Across a crowed room,
our eyes locked together
Saying in a flash our feelings
A light shining in them
\A flame has wake up in you
I have stole your heart forever
Take all the place that was there
Being the only one for you
\The intensity of your gaze
Has darkens your beautiful eyes
Deep and dark like the ocean
submerging me with your love
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Stella Pondard More than 1 year ago
somtimes in a crowd we can see in a glance a real interest igniting like a fire of passion in the eyes of a stranger
Poetry.com 4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 3 reviews.
Gul Akbar More than 1 year ago
theme is graceful and heart-touching keep it up
David Andrew More than 1 year ago
You have great meaning in this work and feelings of love. Good work Could use a few grammar fixes.
Sue Burnett More than 1 year ago
Sounds like a good poem of young love. One that has not be through trials. Nice and light with promises of the future.
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