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Love Refusal

Can't think,
Can't blink,
Can't write
Can't fight
Can't see
Can't be
my dream
Can't cry
Wont try
to hide
the facts
Because love is nothig but a trap
I hug because i wont love
So why stay when i can do it my way
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Poetry.com 3.7 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 6 reviews.
Liz Dolegiewicz Mlynarski More than 1 year ago
But a jerkish read I thought it was fantastic
Lindsey Phillips More than 1 year ago
It's a very simplistic and interesting poem. At first, it seems like a sad falling out of love story. But the last line is quite deep, and open the door to perhaps an escape. However, the line, and the title, doesn't exactly make sense to me. Do you think you could explain it? I do like the pattern though.
Kadidja Cisse More than 1 year ago
the line i wont hug because I wont love in a way that I am refusing
Leon Giovanni More than 1 year ago
nice writing
roman beadoff More than 1 year ago
I hug because i wont love === interesting
Nicholas Guy More than 1 year ago
Slightly erratic.
Larry Stallings More than 1 year ago
i don't understand the ending
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