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Equal for all

When my thoughts take a flight
And soar to a dizzy height
I see from above earth below
Shadows somewhere and glow
On my thoughts I further ride
I see no boundaries that divide
No caste color or creed
Nature is same for all indeed
Allows all in its lap play
No hurdles, keeps none away
 
When nature’s fury is let loose
It’s equal for all, no pick & choose
 
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Tejinder Singh More than 1 year ago
Mother nature treats everyone equally without discrimination
Poetry.com 4.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 0 reviews.
tony right More than 1 year ago
you won one with the critic..ha...ha..well written...flow was great..message was great...rhyming was great...a great poem from a poet
Ashok Babu More than 1 year ago
meaningful words...loved the meter and flow TS pls visit http://www.poetry.com/poems/530279-A-Poet-s-Questions-
Tejinder Singh More than 1 year ago
thanks
Candice Arney More than 1 year ago
Simple to the point beautifully put...
Tejinder Singh More than 1 year ago
i am grateful
The Critic More than 1 year ago
My disdain for the hard rhyming format is well-known by now, the way it limits the innate creativity of the writer and the problems it places on primary lines vs. endcaps within a couplet. However, Tejinder Singh's "Equal For All" is the exception to the rule. While not every line is a gem, and some of them seem stunted to fit the primary line, overall, the author puts together a well-thought out, well- executed short form piece with good structural arrangements and theme. Altogether, a well done hard rhyme with minor flaws that do not take away from the overall picture.
Tejinder Singh More than 1 year ago
I am so grateful for your review. Thanks for making the exception. This rhyming came naturally with exception of 1-2 places. I thank you for your time. Tejinder
The Critic More than 1 year ago
You are very welcome. I am usually not too kind when it comes to the hard rhyme format. It is the most simplistic of the poetic forms, but also the most difficult to get right. However, when someone does get it right, as you accomplished with "Equal For All", I have to acquiesce and praise it. As I stated in my review, this was a well-thought out, well executed piece with few flaws. Well done.
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