Equal for all
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When my thoughts take a flight
And soar to a dizzy height
I see from above earth below
Shadows somewhere and glow
On my thoughts I further ride
I see no boundaries that divide
No caste color or creed
Nature is same for all indeed
Allows all in its lap play
No hurdles, keeps none away
When nature’s fury is let loose
It’s equal for all, no pick & choose
And soar to a dizzy height
I see from above earth below
Shadows somewhere and glow
On my thoughts I further ride
I see no boundaries that divide
No caste color or creed
Nature is same for all indeed
Allows all in its lap play
No hurdles, keeps none away
When nature’s fury is let loose
It’s equal for all, no pick & choose
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Mother nature treats everyone equally without discrimination
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Poetry.com 4.8 out of 5 based on 4 votes.
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you won one with the critic..ha...ha..well written...flow was great..message was great...rhyming was great...a great poem from a poet
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meaningful words...loved the meter and flow TS
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Simple to the point beautifully put...
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My disdain for the hard rhyming format is well-known by now, the way it limits the innate creativity of the writer and the problems it places on primary lines vs. endcaps within a couplet. However, Tejinder Singh's "Equal For All" is the exception to the rule. While not every line is a gem, and some of them seem stunted to fit the primary line, overall, the author puts together a well-thought out, well- executed short form piece with good structural arrangements and theme. Altogether, a well done hard rhyme with minor flaws that do not take away from the overall picture.
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