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When I looked at the stars

The stars tonight
Shines so bright and their light
Makes me stare way up high 
Until I reach the starry sky 

I wonder if I would see you tonight 
Laying there on a star; smiling
I wonder whether you can hear my heartbeat
Or whether you see that our eyes meet

I've always known I'd stay alone
That is why I can't stay strong 
Look at the stars 
I've always wanted them to be us

We'd feel each other close
Shine with all our light
You'd give me a starry rose
And say how much you loved me tonight
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Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Very good !!!!
Shir Hanochi More than 1 year ago
thank you.
Carmen Guzman Zamorano More than 1 year ago
very sweet poem.
Shir Hanochi More than 1 year ago
thank you
drkgbalakrishnan kandangath More than 1 year ago
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Shir Hanochi More than 1 year ago
Thank you
Ingrid Luvgud More than 1 year ago
love it
Shir Hanochi More than 1 year ago
Thank you
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
Very good poem
Shir Hanochi More than 1 year ago
Thank you
Kendra Williams More than 1 year ago
This has beautiful meaning. Thank you for sharing.
Shir Hanochi More than 1 year ago
Thank you.
Ludy Bührs More than 1 year ago
Very nice expressed! One minor thing: I've always KNOWN I'd stay alone
Shir Hanochi More than 1 year ago
Thank you.
tony right More than 1 year ago
nice sentiments...wish and desire...just need opporutnity...keep looking and remember that it once was said how much he loved you
Shir Hanochi More than 1 year ago
Thank you.
Isaac Rodriguez More than 1 year ago
Have you tried writing without rhyme?
Shir Hanochi More than 1 year ago
Actually I have written without rhyme. "left alone" for example.
yvonne sensing More than 1 year ago
Just an okay for me...thanks for sharing
Shir Hanochi More than 1 year ago
thank you.
Maxie Sutton More than 1 year ago
But i think its got the making of a nice poem
Shir Hanochi More than 1 year ago
Thank you
Sherrie More than 1 year ago
more positve!
Shir Hanochi More than 1 year ago
Alright, thank you
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