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Blessings of the Time !

Yet time has to ripe bringing you into my life
Fruitful to glow with the ripening colour !
Smell of ripening fills the air
making me yearn with fervour !
Marching ahead dreams dance in tune
Echoing every tune with a cheer,
your smiles foretell what is near !
Weary days have gone forever
and time has brought together
peace and happiness into our hour !
Jingling bells are heard ringing
bringing together the times' blessing !
It's the time of winning
Every second clicks on with a shining
along wide blue sky with a silver lining.
Reflecting the moods beaming
chirping sparrows flitter and fly
brightened with the touching hue
still I have to wait for what is due !
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Poetry.com 3.3 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 4 reviews.
Angel Rivera More than 1 year ago
Hunt Maley More than 1 year ago
Although I liked the overall poem, this poem is a little too busy for my taste. Other descriptive words were needed that matched the flow and the Iambic pentameter better. Don't know much about the author but she has good potential :)
Kalai Selvi More than 1 year ago
Thanks for your words. I will work on that.
Merideth Napue More than 1 year ago
Needs work on use of metaphors.
Kalai Selvi More than 1 year ago
Thanks for pointing out. I will work on that.
Akinpelu Abdulgafar More than 1 year ago
a good one
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