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The Battle Within

get awake
make coffee
drink coffee
watch news
get in truck
drive away from warm house coffee and news
my stomach hurts
the suns rays slash at me...
make music louder to fight back
look at stupid people in cars beside me
where do they work?
theres that idiot that passed me 2 miles back
somehow it would end out being my fault
like soo many things..
nothings more offensive than
the "morning person"
with his "happy face"
spraying smiles at everyone who looks his way
i avoid eye contact,,to save his life
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Jamie Sandifer More than 1 year ago
I feel ya..lol
Kenny Blake More than 1 year ago
Excellent use
Matthew Simmons More than 1 year ago
I read this aloud and I felt like Mitch Hedberg. I like it that's all I can say.
haiku artist More than 1 year ago
red and black, white-eyed smiley face of insects, sweet little lady bug
Sonia Sarang More than 1 year ago
I was hooked at "the suns rays slash at me..." I'm not a morning person either. LOL. Easy to relate to. Here's to morning coffee :)
Eden Mini More than 1 year ago
AHAHAHA! This gave me a good laugh. I could see this becoming a comic or something. xD
haiku artist More than 1 year ago
woke up on the wrong side of the head
Gerrard Wilson More than 1 year ago
This is a very good poem - now drink some more coffee!
Debra Barber More than 1 year ago
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Kevin Losolla More than 1 year ago
i don't know what to think about this one xD
Jane Lomas More than 1 year ago
interestin read
Diana Cote More than 1 year ago
It's an alright depiction and listing of what happens negatively so early in the morning on this person's way to work...I would like to see you reflect a little on what some of the other things are that end up being this person's fault...It would really add to the poem....and maybe let the reader know why this person is so angry....
Oyedele Oluwasegun More than 1 year ago
wow! what n account!
Mahmoud Hanfy More than 1 year ago
good
Prithvijeet Saha More than 1 year ago
now try another sip of coffeee
Chris O'Dowd More than 1 year ago
Not worth it to critique
Jessica Weber More than 1 year ago
I know what you are trying to say and how you feel but it lacks a little in the body. It doesn't really seem to do justice, plus there are a couple of grammatical errors but I know it's something that can be fixed.
Simran Sinha More than 1 year ago
nice
Suzy C. More than 1 year ago
This writer is a worry! Hope it was just a case of a bad day!
Russell Daye More than 1 year ago
well the poem lacked alot of subtance but i guess it was ok i was really offended by the profile picture though im like really a hitler mustache.....how disrespectful......
Zahid Tariq More than 1 year ago
Free floating ideas
Jie Yu More than 1 year ago
Claim down man, hopefully you have a good day
Annette Knotz More than 1 year ago
i'm not sure
Carley Martin More than 1 year ago
telling about your day
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