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Take Your Pain Away

 would take your pain away,
If it took my breath from me.
There is nothing I wouldn’t do,
If I could only set you free.

When I look into your eyes,
I see sadness deeply hidden.
Fear, desire, and passions,
The things this life has forbidden.

I want to fill your heart with peace,
And see the joy in your face.
Through the sorrows and the pain,
I would gladly take your place.

I'd wipe the tears from your eyes,
Before they ever start.
I’d sooth your weary mind,
And heal your broken heart.

All the troubles that you’ve seen,
Would be forgotten with the past.
Your future would be bright,
And your life would be a blast.

I have this master plan,
That will take your pain away.
It really isn’t difficult,
I’ll just love you every day.
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Poetry.com 4.5 out of 5 based on 11 ratings. 12 reviews.
Mike McAfee More than 1 year ago
Dale Garman More than 1 year ago
Beautiful poem - I hope you don't mind. I just shared your poem (giving you credit) on Facebook in tribute to a friend who just passed away.
Akther More than 1 year ago
nice poems
Shaun Anthony More than 1 year ago
Keep up the good work!
Helema Jones More than 1 year ago
Thank you for sharing your heartfelt poem
Drew Espie More than 1 year ago
One of the best poems on here!
Gary Ferris More than 1 year ago
Thanks Drew
T. M Ioane More than 1 year ago
Theme is expansive but description is intrinsic and specific. Love reading it.
Harvinder Singh More than 1 year ago
described well but smoot
Laura-Rose Barker More than 1 year ago
Great pace, emotion and rhyme. Like it a lot.
Gary Ferris More than 1 year ago
Thanks Laura
Edward Wahbe More than 1 year ago
We have no idea what happened in the past between the poet and this broken hearted person. The poet is assuming the mastery of this person's future whom she doesn't refer to as a lover. A very simplistic attitude to love by just promising to love him every day; did she show love at all before.? How can she judge that he is suffering, maybe he is just indifferent to the whole affair. Not too convincing. The poem is set in nice quadruplets , but simple terms .The poet should take to writing more often to enable a dialogue in how the partner really feels . Pain is not usually without incidents . Describe one.
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