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Coma Vacation

How about giving up vacation in reality
to have a fantasy that you will live in
Anything can happen in your fantasy
and loose weight not eating to become thin
Inside your induced coma it may
send you on a trip without any fear
The time you spend can be a day
but it could seem to you a whole year
You may want to stay in coma vacation for a week
But it can seem like a decade so reality you might seek
Now there is a sad detail but it is not dangerous at all
There are people that can not control how their brains recall
You might see a baby pushing an adult in a cart
or you could see people crying at some very funny art
Sadly there are a few of us with imagination completely gone
So while there body is on vacation There imagination will not turn on
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Dennis Card More than 1 year ago
I was in an induced coma for a whole month but in my mind it seemed like years
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William Scriven 9 months ago
amazing choice of subject
Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi More than 1 year ago
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Ross Simcox More than 1 year ago
I like the theme but the rhyming is a little straightforward for my liking, keep it up though!
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