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When I'm With Her

Leon Feehan

Free verse
the days are getting shorter and the nights are colder
but that doesn't matter when i'm with her
she makes me feel giddy and my cheeks go red
i feel flattered when i'm with her
she makes me smile for miles and laugh for hours
it makes me feel great when i'm with her
she doesn't care about my weaknesses shes weighs up my strengths
which makes me feel happy when i'm with her
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Written on October 29, 2022

Submitted by feehan.leon on October 29, 2022

Modified by feehan.leon on October 30, 2022

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABACADA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 375
Words 74
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
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