Spatial
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this sounds so professional. the musicality and meter, both are neatly cut. I enjoy reading the poet's poems.

your poetic voice resonates for me in this poem. I like the old 10 sentences style. this is a rare person. a gift in the poet's life. I enjoyed what the poet has shared.

your talent shows in this ballad. I find them intimidating. you make it look easy. I know it isn't. the form is perfect. the content is touching. the musicality is precious.

the pain is palpable. the writing is well-written and each word is selected deliberately. so much triumph, so great the battle. I enjoyed reading, wishing for the poet freedom from the stress.

this poem is a devotional to both God and the faith one of belief carries. it is filled with praise.

This is a great capture of times in Africa. Church is pivotal in this poem. The meter moved swiftly. The content is touching. The images are many and the musicality is magical. A great poem!

I think the second stanza is powerful. You have a way with expressing yourself.