rameshs.88917
  Silver Member

It is my humble request to all the authors to read my poems and suggest me to improve.

Very nice composition on personal feelings and wonderful platform to express inner most thoughts. The poem reflects different stages like nostalgic to womanhood, unknown to wisdom and innocence to experience etc. The flow of time waits for no one.One side happiness of the past and on the other side loss of the golden childhood mingles beautifully in the lucid lines. I can say self realisation and judgement. I like dramatic monologue technique proper uses of similes images etc. Congratulations Ma'am. more »

Wow very informative and knowledgeable master piece.When I go through the lyric,feel as if I should have read the Dentist's prescription earlier so that I could have saved my present gap teeth .The lines are not coming from Scholar of English literature but from a science researcher.Any way ,I too motivated by your instructive suggestions and assured to brush my teeth daily twice.I will share your poem to my students also. Each quatrain expresses depth of meaning in simple words. Congratulations Ma'am. more »

Oo Your Highness! I know--

ha ha ,I seem still J Alfred Prufrock of 20 th century

Yes, beautiful thought provoking poem on the present climate and global warming that effects the environment.The poem has got similarity with the present tragic fire at Lost Angeles. Very beautiful composition on your personal emotions and experiences.Congrats. more »

Yes,it is the flavour of modernity and the impacts of modernism in 20 th century. But it is said that old id is gold.I like traditional dresses as reminds us about all-time timeless classic beauty and ancestors' heritage, symbol of respect for them and handed over to us.But old fashion of dresses are overlapped in due time.But still I preserved high baggy waisted killer Jeans,Reebok hollow sweeter this takes me to the past days.I admire your style of describing colour of objects and provoking light mood.
Exceptional creativity. Congratulations Ma'am. more »

It is a very nice poem on hope and strong determination and expresses various experience of your personal life.Yes our lives are full of ups and downs but we should keep struggling be optimistic.I admire your thought provoking one stanza poem. more »

I admire thine thoughts provoking and metaphorically interpretation of Life as an adventurous journey. Thine strong determination and courageous will to over come all the obstacles on your path is individual and common phenomena of modern mind.The choice in life and journey on untravelled road reflects your strong will power and optimistic perspectives to reach the goal of life .
I appreciate your ornamented poetic lines and justification of metaphors. I got some similarities and in connection of your poem I added the lines from Robert Frost's poem 'The Road not taken '
" I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference." more »

It's thine nobility,Your Highness, me a learner only in world poetry plz.

Exceptional creativity, me overwhelmed at your one stanza poems and punctuation. It is full of optimism and informative agendas, and a lesson of life , experience of sweet and bitter. Congratulations dear poet. I try to catch Your points. more »

extended gratefulness for your valuable comments,it is a great inspiration for me.

Again excited to get 10/10 , Thnks Poetry team for the GK test platform.

I extended my heartfelt gratefulness to the poetry team for the honour promoting to Silver Member.Me purely learn in the world poetry.
May beg to put a query why my photo is not seen while commenting on our poet's upload plz. more »

grateful to you for thy lovely word