gary_dean
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This poem is strong, it's a metaphor for navigating life. It speaks convincingly from the female side of mankind, earning a seat at the table, that a woman is due by birthright anyway. This is solid poetry. more »

I think the author identified the key to self worth.; it's knowing we are enough and rebuffing all outside messages from the world that say otherwise. I relate to the scenes of self doubt and depression the author writes. Coming through those times with a stronger self image a great victory, worthy of a poem. more »

This poem sings of a place of safety. Like a sensory deprivation tank, dark, and warm, and comforting. Adrift on a sea with no storm clouds on the horizon. Can we forget the storms completely there?

I found this piece lyrical, and encouraging. It's a timeless message, "carry on". I could feel the music of the authors mind.

Hi. I don't know, I never tried that. Best of luck.

we can read them when the voting starts. I hope that helps.

What exquisite language, "relentless, as the tide's demand to wash the tracks of yesterday", what a sad memory to require that much power to smooth.
"Her eyes.....to the past/ to heal then break...fast". There is the cognitive dissonance of the daughter who recalls the sister. This really moved me to emotion. more »

I remember how precious the moments with little ones. Nothing brings love quite like our kids. If ever there is a reason to write a poem, that is it.

Last month I read every entry and I expect to do the same this time. This is a great way to share the works.

It's a timely topic; meaningful. The metaphor is stable throughout so it's highly readable. It's a pleasant and thoughtful "voice".

This is a pretty poem. I wonder that we compare a mere mortal to a perfect rose; is that fair? Pain is certain when we project our desire upon others. Perhaps they will show us who they really are.

you are very kind to read and leave a comment. I appreciate you and thanks. -Gary