nelzealoursmotoe1
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Lovely Poem
Keep up the good work

I like this stanza “ My voice will echo across distant mountains
My tears will flood the seven seas
My blood will stain your twisted hands
As you extinguish my breath from me”

And the run ons

I like this expression “I wanted the ride home to take a year, but it was as instantaneous as an explosion. “

The scar that endures surgery
Eish! This experience isn't easy to explain but the brave ones do come out to explain.

Lovely piece this is
I can imagine that yearning that people have
That yearning that makes us entangled within our minds.

Beautiful piece

I like the use of run ons on this poem

Where's the poetry
This is lovely

This pictures what drivers who drive at night go through
Sometimes with heavy eyelids.
I like the poem it's lovely!

Lovely poem
Seeing how you loved your first engagement

Lovely!

thanks Christian

Quite intriguing and insightful

Good one!

Love this "Life's journey is one best shared
When two hearts no longer roam
So walk with me to eternity
Or, Shall I walk alone?" Sounds like a proposal.