Akartist907

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My name is Jordane, the "e" is silent. I was born and mostly raised in Alaska. In school I struggled to get through all my English classes. I even took a creative writing class for a semester and I struggled to write anything in that class. At age 27, I started writing in a journal and it started out as venting but soon turned into a poem. And I've been reading and practicing writing poetry since.

  March 2023     1 day ago

Submitted Poems 4 total

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I hate that your not with me,
You should of had more time
If love alone could have saved you
You would have never died

Losing you was so unexpected
This heartache has no end
There's no words that can express it
It's impossible to...

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Gone but not forgotten

When I lost you
grief arrived with a twin
One asked

 that I mourn who you were
The other
that I mourn who you could have been
My heart feels torn in two
Half of me is buried with you
The other half
Lives on honoring you
I think of all our...

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Gaslight

You must have a heart made of steel
To deny to me what I feel
That you don't understand what was the big deal
Telling me to explain and relive the painful Ordeal
Just for you to tell me I don't know what is real
I know what I went through...

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Why do you pick

You know what I dont get?
Why you sit there and pick?
You know it makes you look mentally sick

You snap back and act like a crazy prick
Maybe if you learn how to quit
you'll be a little less of a dick
But I know that's not something your...

– by Jordane Garrity

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u wish what?

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thank you for the suggestions and did edit it and made the corrections! I wrote the poem all in 1 night and think I was pretty tired by the end which is why I don't think I noticed those errors so thank you for catching them! 

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I think this has a great message that can speak to everyone and is written beautifully!

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I'm sorry to hear of your sisters tradegy and for you as well. It was a very helpless feeling for me to know my sister was in an unimaginable pain but it felt like there wasn't anything that could be said or done to help. 

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I'm so sorry for your loss. Some days I'm not sure if my sister will recover from her loss. But it gives me hope for her to hear that you managed to recovered from a similar loss and you were strengthen for it. I hope my sister and her husband can do the same. 

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This would make a cute children's book

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This is so sweet, I love it!

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thank you

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