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  December 2022     1 year ago

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Transparent Lives pt 1

Fuck! I am stuck within the loop. A Farris wheel of blame for not expressing the truth. A foot on thorns while biting the forbidden fruit. Oblivious to the pain like a kid with cartoons.

Broke and ashamed, assuming I could work my way out of it....

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You Want Me To Stop?

You want me to stop writing? I just won't breathe then. Cuz that's what it feels like not having my thoughts penned. Exhume my ashes so my soul can grow again. Going after a dream as if I seek vengeance.

I fought myself before and ignored the...

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Obsessed With Effort

Obsessed with effort, time will let me know when it's enough. Deny my wishes and blame suffering on the luck. I am cutting the wings of desire while taping the tongue of love. Endeavor success until it can give a hug.

Fighting my demons while...

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One Last Call

Hey mom, I know it's been a while.
I am still traumatized from what transpired.
Life became difficult, as if on fire.
Living became demoralizing, and it amplified without her.

Presume that while hiding pain, the feeling will subdue.
The...

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Counting Mistakes

Fighting for a breath but lost in the moment.
Emotionally damaged a home in fragments.
A partner who kills an ego like it's a contest.
While I put an effort many would invest.

Silence the mind I become withdrawn.
Hate myself in ways that...

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Thank you for the kind words. Yes reguardless of what gets thrown whether it's harsh words or certain phrases. Facial expressions of disgust the love is there. Through all the pain still having that affection means a lot. Thank you for taking the time to read and provide feedback. 

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Thank you for the kind words. I am pleased that you enjoyed the read. Thank you for taking the time to read and give feedback.

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Thank you for your comment. I appreciate the kind words. It's difficult to get recognition. It pleases me every time someone notices the effort. I wanted to emphasize on a relationship with a partner who's emotionally abusive. Show how regularlless of the pain and patience involved the love between the two are as ideal as it can be. Thank you for reading. I appreciate you taking the time to write a comment. 

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I like this poem a lot. Reminds me of some of the poems I write with the rhyming. I currently have one poem on this website to reference but I have much more on other websites. Nevertheless this is great. Good job keep it up. 

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