mattd.04593
  Junior Member

I liked this poem very much. It reads like fantasy. thank you for putting it up. We always need more great poets out there.

I loved the poem sir. I thought it was amazing. What I liked about it especially was the man behind the story. You write very fluently and it is a great honor to read. Thank you.

It sounds like your mocking someone. I don't think this is what poetry should be about. But it kind of sounds like a song to tme.

It sounds like dialogue to me. Luike something an actor would recite in the mirror. A very beautiufl piece, thank you for sharing. And for the record, I can def relate to what your saying.

It reads like a song. I like it. Second comment I know, but very nice young lady.

And then our dying—releasing ourselves
from the very ground on which we stood—
I thought this line was very beautiuful.

The idea of a desert rose is very appealing to me. Like, something alive growing from a thing as sterile as a desert. Thank you for sharing. I thought it was amazing. I like the part where the flower is confused, is it like this desert or does it know it is beautiful. Very nice sir. more »

That was very beautiful. Its hard to write poetry about addiction. Not everyone gets it. But I do. I thnk your words are awesome. Thank you for sharing. Oh and your hot!