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  June 2022     2 years ago

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Sestina Upon Return From Disney World, June 2022

“A vacation with children,” said her friend
“Is not for pleasure -- it is a trip.”
And the mother agreed, and sent a text
To her husband and his sister and his mom
To try to think, to consider, maybe -- a plan
And to make sure to include all of...

– by D. L. Clark

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I liked the wordplay and the metaphor of "bernouli effect". I recall learning this scientific theory and demonstrating via a model or experiment at my house - the effect of the bernouli effect, as demonstrated in this poem that cleverly uses english language to effect feelings about science and (personal and scientific) history. We all need a "lift" - as Bernouli himself noted. 

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Love the 2nd "verse" contrasting a person eschewing devices feeling like a smudge verses the person (people, the speaker feels surrounded) in a blue electric world. Raises the question of what is real? and then the speaker sees the reality of the woman arriving verses what she imagined in her head. Are feelings and imagination real? If not, why NOT be in a (just as real and non-real) blue electric world? Hmmm Thank you for posting! 

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