osomstudios

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  May 2022     1 year ago

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Paint

Will you be disappointed in me.
When you find a body in the backseat
of the red mirage
with blacked out windows.
The one I park in the garage
of blank two faced shadows.
But that’s too much information
about this two-car car park.
Because...

– by Kaleb Barkman

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Great work! I love the different images of happiness shown in each stanza.

1 year ago

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This poem is relatable and I like the use of "heart" imagery. My only suggestion is to edit out the typos and grammar issues. I find that they remove me from the world of the poem. Other than that, great work! 

1 year ago

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