7samcro
  Junior Member

I read every single poem in this contest, I narrowed it down to a select few. This was not only a story that flowed very well, that also rhymed!, but one that had a moral as well. The ending, how you ended up following the masses was great. It demonstrated how humans conform to society. It is natural but sometimes people aimlessly follow what everyone else is doing. I enjoyed how you added how those who follow may do it out of fear as well. Job well done!! more »

This poem is beautifully written, I felt it. The emotion was real and I related to it, well done!