nooshin
  Bronze Member

wow... great quest(ion)s!
think at the end of your poem the answer is found... we should just keep questioning... the answer is the question...
really enjoyed the flow and the journey...

thanks! glad you liked my impression... this poem is so magical!

beautiful! especially liked the story/lesson part...

glad you liked it... thanks!

dead i amto those who forgetalive i am
to words that i write

the forgotten sea of life
is always true
to those who are lost
in
love

great way to remember your brother, dear poet friend @cokerrogers ... may his soul rest in peace! more »

dead i am
to those who forget

alive i am
to words that i write
the forgotten sea of life
is always true
to those who are lost
in
love

great way to remember your brother, dear poet friend @cokerrogers ... may his soul rest in peace! more »

wow! yes... exactly! you could relate deeply... really appreciate your comment , dear fellow poet!

thank you! yes... hope his message will grow into a big tree...

what a journey! really enjoyed the sour/sweet taste of this poem that expanded a simple metaphor into a journey of understanding and wisdom...
all the poetic games with words were also sweet...

the magic of the poem is in the opening stanza especially the first 2 lines: loving a person two or three times even before knowing her face or name! then the firework in the mind begins and the poet shows how this is possible... at the end you come to a new understanding of love... beautiful! more »

all goes to the beauty of your poem... :)

really enjoyed reading this... i especially liked the way the candle and the reflection of the persona's face resembled the sun and the moon... and how all the elements of nature joined in a cosmic dance with both... more »

this poem is magic!
i've read it many times during my life... and found out we are at such fork many many times... in fact we live to choose...

and the secret message is hidden in these lines:

Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
I doubted if I should ever come back.

yes, we can never come back... we just go forward to face another fork... :) more »

powerful imagery and symbolism... it touches a chord deep within the soul... exactly where that voice in the well of our subconscious is waiting to be released... to travel on... to share its story with others...
this seemingly simple poem has the power to level off the slopes of solitude and abandonment... more »