frtjseigel
  Junior Member

Thank you Dougla$. I read one yours yesterday, too, and thought it was very good. Please, no need for an apology at all. I very miuch appreciated your insight. I found a little bit of a discrepency in my thought about God speaking to us near the end of the poem. It probably still needs a little bit of work. Thank you for your very kind reply.

Tim more »

God is the speaker of the poem, not me. I know I wrote it, but it was borne out of prayer, and my feeble attempt to listen to God.