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I have always scribbled notes down about my thoughts, even in the dark hours of a morning, using a pen and pad beside the bed. Whether it was a line of code fixing a software program, or an appealing piece of lyrical verse for a new poem. My latest note for the start of a rhyme was "I smelt the smelts", after the wife complained about the smelts I was cooking, but no complaints from the dog. A poem about the smell of seafood cooking will follow later. Having a cynical attitude and a sense of irony, helps me navigate through a World we have made complicated through: Religions, societies, empires, democracies, dictatorships, organizations, companies, communities, schools of philosophies, and economic systems. Upon reflection I actually believe that writing a software program and writing a poem take on the same mental structure, I use the same methodology for each. Get an idea or be provided a specification, plan out the task, write the task, test (rewrite) the task until satisfied with the end result. As a semi-retired software developer and web-site designer, my verse compositions have been an enjoyable change of pace (no deadlines to face). My poetry verses are my poetic expressions of my observations of nature (which many people ignore), and their poetic nature convey my humour and empathy with my surroundings, from the sea, to the earth, to the cosmos, and all life-forms therein (including those in other worlds). My habitat is in Ontario, Canada (Lat. 43.4500° N, Lon. 80.4833° W). I will publish here examples of my endeavors in rhyming poetry writing, and I present these poems free of any great pretensions, especially in comparison to "my inspirational poets": Thomas Hardy, Alfred Lord Tennyson, James H. Knight-Adkin, Rupert Brooke, William Blake, Edward Lear, Dylan Thomas, and A. E. Housman. My poetry sometimes seems to exceed my expectations, but I then read the great poets for a reality check.

  July 2021     3 months ago

Submitted Poems 8 total

Bored Time

Maybe I'm not poetry in motion
I write poetry to fill mind gaps when in stagnation
I hate my mind being in this almost empty void
It makes me feel quite annoyed
I could fill time gaps with household chores
That will earn me some wifely scores
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by Dave Johnstone

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Bar Chatter

Bar banter can be strange
When in a vocal exchange
Especially after a few beers
When drinking with your peers
Thinking What is this type of chatter
While the mind adjusts to the subject matter.

A dialogue will be a joint activity
In which...

by Dave Johnstone

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Gonna Wanna

wanna

I hafta write this verse
I gotta make it terse
And then I thought
I’mma gonna be distraught
If poems too long
Then I kinda done it wrong
And I'll wanna make amends
So lemme see how it trends
But I dunno how this issue ends. ...

by Dave Johnstone

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Cheers

I like to drink to mingle and relax
And forget about my life's small cracks
The pub breaks down a daily tedium
and thus provides a special medium
To socialize and get a little high
so easily done without a sigh
the only cost is a pricey beer
...

by Dave Johnstone

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SIGNS OF WINTER

SIGNS OF WINTER

Dark in the morning and evening time as well
Warmer clothes are worn as temperatures fell
Summer shorts have been washed and stored
Condensation on bathroom mirror is like a chalkboard
More robust hot and starchy foods for...

by Dave Johnstone

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added 6 months ago
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I like this piece as a lot of it makes sense, in my life. Nicely written and clear thoughts. Well done

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I'm another newbie. Finding my way around the website. Looks interesting.

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