Josephtopichjr
  Bronze Member

Do not even know we're to begin, keep writing

epigastric

Wow that was something just not sure what

hate is ti strong of a word, I read this three times and it brings no feel to the table, when I read I want to be touched in some sort I'd fashion. Some may like reading for reading sake and come away empty handed but I like to feel emotion from what I am spending my precious minutes looking at, no hate just nit for my taste. more »

So this poem is about a stalker

it's remarkably boring

How does this work relate to your life experience

I read your poem again and again it says nothing that would evoke any response from the reader except that I wasted my time reading this dribble

you really compare well to the first place poem with the lack of feeling in your wroting

My father's Toyota Corolla needs to be read again by the voters of this contest and compared to the winners

This poem got my vote and was the only one I read that actually brought any feeling or soul to the paper, sorry you did not win

Emotion free writing

Rambling without depth

It's beautiful sadness that brought a tear to my eye, I believe it speaks to many no matter which seat you were in

A little overboard