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unknown_r   Junior Editor

I’m still very new to poetry. Therefore, any feedback is appreciated!

Submitted Poems 5 total

I am “Blank” (short)

I relish in my pain,
Without it I am blank.

by Jordan

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5 months ago

My vowel is your word

I speak boldly mute,
A dead man without tell.

A burning hell of thoughts,
A mourning of what I wish for-
but, for what I am naught.

by Jordan

added by unknown_r
5 months ago

The Space of I and You

I wish for someone who not take the words for what they are
Rather for what they mean

I and you with a space in between-
That space, a void needing a simple word to bare-
However, this is no simple affair

by Jordan

added by unknown_r
5 months ago

The Mind of A Poet

“I am a poet”

This must mean I’m a savant of moods, and a wordsmith by craft
Though true, these are after effects-
Understanding they lack

See a poet thinks deeply, and feels deeper

I wouldn’t wish a poetic mind on my worst enemy

by Jordan

added by unknown_r
5 months ago

The Tempo of My Heart

The tempo of my heart
The tremolo trembling

The staccato of pain soaked needles
And the crescendo of self loathing

A tenor that’s of tender flesh-
Whips of agony play cadence

by Jordan

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5 months ago

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I liked this especially well since I didn’t read the title first. Left me with 2 different meanings when I looked up at it

5 months ago

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