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The four-line stanza goes quite well with the rhyming couplet and there is a good abundance of poetic verses in this. but the real cause of the whole situation is not exposed in the poem as far as one can easily tell, but the poem as a whole is good and deserves its wining status.
Good read! 

1 month ago

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We do not know why this person soon will be gone. But only the attitude before it. It makes one questions this, will you go with a frown or with a smile so to speak. It is an excellent poem with many good things such as the rhyme-scheme and the situation it raises. One can see why it was chosen as the winner and well-deserved.
Good read! 

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The question here, and it is a good one, can that magic come true? As when one says that a picture is worth one thousand words. But it is true that at times verbal expressions do not do the trick and silence can speak louder than words such as a smile, a hug or as in the thing in question in this good poem: a flower.
Your poem opens a huge conversation on the matter and one can clearly see why is was chosen as the month winner. 

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It is not clear if the situation here if for going from youth and beauty to ugliness and old age or if the cause of all this is something else or both, but the picture the poem paints is pitiful and sad.
A poem that has its moments of a situation gone bad and that could be the main reason for the selection. 

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The poem does not tell what she died of, but the grief he feels is unmistaken. One can see the pain of losing a loved one such as a dear wife. One thing, there are some weak lines in the poem. It would take so much time to go into them here, but the poem has its moments of good poetic expressions through sorrowful words.
One can see what this poem was voted a winner. 

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This is not bad. One thing to notice: at times the voice of the poem blames himself or herself for the situation and at other times gives it hope. But one thing is for sure, no one should blame himself for depression; it is the silent killer and many times the person cannot help it and needs medical aid or care.
Congratulations on being selected poem of the mind. One can see why. This poem touches on a very delicate situation or illness: depression. 

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Grievances forgotten and the self reestablished this seems to be saying. This is my read.
The poetic language is not bad and the lines flow well.
Good read!

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This seems to be about planting the seeds of love as early as possible for best results. The rhyme-scheme is not bad and the diction is poetic.
Good read!

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This paints not a pleasant situation, but it is in terms with the broad rather than with the specific. It does not tell the place, the people or why it is that way, the picture painted in the poem, but the poem is not a bad one; it has merit as poetic expression and deserves reading. 

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The imagery here is fantastic. You've done quite well with your choice of words giving this poem a wonderful and magical language that makes the poem a pleasure to read.
Great job!

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Good use of rhyme and diction are seen in this poem. The stanzas are well-made, an the lines have much poetic language. In all, this is an excellent poem as some may see.
Good read!

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This poem describes well what is going on in the mind of the speaker. The diction chosen is quite suitable for what it wants to convey, that the situation is serious.
A good poem that tells a lot.

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In this poem the subject realizes the situation and remains hopeful. The things wanting to be seen are not material or concrete but of the soul like the smile shown.
The poem has a story easy to follow and the flow is not bad.
This is a poem deserving readers. 

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This poem is a success of form, content, and substance. Out of bad situations something good, marvelous emerges.
It is to be admired the rhyme-scheme and the good flow of the lines that go quite well with the poetic language that is exhibited form start to end.
Good read! 

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One can extend this poem far beyond the language of driving. It can be taken as an advice on life.
I find the writing of it well-done and the diction well-thought out.
Good read!

2 months ago

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Nothing complicating in all of this. Any one who knows the Bible would appreciate this paraphrase so to speak.
This is s good poem for any believer to read..

2 months ago

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I like this. You are clever with the rhyme-scheme, and the words work like magic. They flow well and contain poetic meaning and otherwise.
Good read!

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It seems that the first line is a bit confusing. It's hard to see how it would work or what it really means or is trying to say as it is now. Thar word "three" gets in the way of a clear or workable meaning.
Another thing, not much poetry in this. It is just some writing stating about something that did not work out, seemingly marriage. 

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There is a pairing here that seems not to work well logically: They not to notice you by day, but they to notice you at night. This seems to run contrary to sense.
Another aspect, the logic or coherence of the poem is lacking a bit in comprehension. The lines are not a good accord with each other. Some modifications would do them good. 

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Your poem opens a huge discussion. Things of this sort give way to many kinds of interpretations or takes. Who knows what the reality, in fact, is. We are still searching to see what's true or not.
Interesting poem. 

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Though there are rhymes that seem a bit forced, one can take from this poem that we should do all we can to make life clean and good for the fish. It plays an important part in nature and her well-being and order of things.
Some verses could be given a much improved line. The message of the poem is the best of this writing. 

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There are some odd lines in this poem. It would read better and clearer if it were modified to, " There is nothing wrong with dreaming." Or, "Dreaming is not wrong."
You're trying to make a case, but the poem is in need of some improvement to make the thought comprehensible or give it a better unity. 

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This is a curious conceit. The leaves are better off if they become detached form the tree when winter came. Or the leaves are miserable because winter came and they are still attached to the tree and men are like that so to speak.
You are making a very intriguing comparison in all of this. It is up to debate if it really works or not. 

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It seems that the last line reads a bit odd. It's hard to see what it really means. It looks like the final word was written to make the rhyme, but the poem has aspects to consider it not a bad one.

2 months ago

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A poem of facing adversity with courage which is easy said than done.
The rhyme-scheme is carried out well. The diction is simple but poetic.
Good read!

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