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	I like your take, in general is not a bad one. One thing is sure: There is much poetry in all of this. Good read! 5 months ago	View
	It is not the length that makes the poem or the poem good or bad, but the writing. This here with only two short lines is a good example of good poetry. Just two verses but they speak volumes and much could be said about them. Well-done! more » 5 months ago	View
	I see some merit in this as a love poem. I think the title in some ways represents what the poems goes on to say. Not a bad read after all. 5 months ago	View
	I like these couplets. The poem is about pain that brings much sadness to the scene. I admire the simple diction to go through all of it. A good and comprehensible read. 5 months ago	View
	Yes, we don't go to the elderly any more for advice and wisdom. Those good days are gone when an old person was really appreciated for he or she had lived life and knew a thing or two to pass to the young. Globalization is not all that. Many things that brought joy and stability to us and our lives are not done or practiced any more. more » 5 months ago	View
	When I read this, I think of those who talk of the beauty of sunny days and worship the sun, but many times the sun heats too much or makes us uncomfortable with so much warm that we wish for fresher days. I think we romanticize the sun too much. Shakespeare in one of his famous sonnets says something like this, "Sometimes the eye of heaven is too hot." And he was right. more » 5 months ago	View
	This is fine, but I am not certain what is that place that has become his holy land. Several come to mind. This poem has a somewhat sad tone. 5 months ago	View
	Yes, though it never brings any consolation to stay in the past, many people do not move out of it and as a result live miserable lives. It is always best to move on. What was done, was done and can't be changed no matter how much one cries or complains about it. more » 5 months ago	View
	No much new here in terms of a religious poem. They are hard to write well for so much has been written on the subject that most poems of that nature read like much cliché. This one is one of them though the effort to write it should be appreciated. more » 5 months ago	View
	it has an interesting title and the rhyme scheme has its good points.. I feel that what it says is worthy of reading and it uses a poetic language to say it. In whole, it is a good poem to read for these reasons and more. more » 5 months ago	View
	Just two lines, but I like it. Now, the thing that is open here is, what was it that he was that I'd been? One can bring a number of situations to mind. But this is what makes the poem interesting. No all poems have to have a definite answer and this is one of them. Good read! more » 5 months ago	View
	I am glad that the line of questioning is answered in the end and thus not making the poem a case of ridicule with all those who am I? Like it is so hard or impossible to know. 5 months ago	View
	I was not sure what the poem was all about until I read the note, ad then I had a grasp on it that I did not have before and it made some sense. Though some lines are poetic, they do not give an easy interpretation. Thus, the note helps. more » 5 months ago	View
	Simple but sweet. A child would love this. 5 months ago	View
	Yes, this is a love poem, and I hate to point out that as one it is mostly composed of cliché lines. The language is far from fresh or interesting when it comes to reading. I know it is not easy to sound impressive but this is a bit too trite as love poetry. more » 5 months ago	View
	We all can find something we can do well; the problem is that sometimes we put the effort on the wrong things. Find or try to find your bliss is the thing here. Everyone has one. 5 months ago	View
	Well, this is quite a way to put it! The delightfulness and the strong feelings are unmistakable in all of this. I read it for the scene it brings to my mind. 5 months ago	View
	Not much as to how to take this. It is a poem of faith with nothing complicated to grasp. The language lacks freshness and is very typical of this kind of poetry. 5 months ago	View
	A little bit of cliché in these lines. Nothing much but about some who was there to give comfort and love and now that person is not there anymore. 5 months ago	View
	This dances around the idea that the noon has the power to change things, to guide us to the good, to make things better. It makes me think of the astrologists of long ago. No, no moon has any saying on how things go down here and they have no light of their one. Our moon gets its light from the sun. But this is poetry and poetry many times is not factual by just a play in words. more » 5 months ago	View
	This is a painful situation. When motivation for doing things is gone life loses its savor, its meaning, its reason for staying alive, but help may arrive if one does the best to seek it. Thus giving up should never be. more » 5 months ago	View
	This makes me think of a poem by Shakespeare to his Love that has a line that goes something like this: "Love wants no years being told," hammering in the difference of age between them. Good read! more » 5 months ago	View
	I get this. There is nothing like the presence of that person. Photos can never replace the real thing by one's side. This poem makes it clear and one goes away with that thought or feeling. 5 months ago	View
	The way the person feels is clear, I give it that. But yes, some lines are trite and come to us like just one more love poem with the same stuff, nothing flesh or different. Bot then love poems are hard to write well for much has been said about love that most of them are more of the same. more » 5 months ago	View
	I like this and what it represents. It makes me think of my cradle days You've dome quite well here with these lines, simple lines but they give a good read. 5 months ago	View