Gregory_g's comments

Nice poem of inspirational faith, commitment, and true love of God
The only way to be free is to submit and obey God's will.
The simple challenge is to keep the faith and to walk with God

Jamal

Oh yeah, broham!
Well, The Black Woman has always been Phenomenal, enduring, and beautiful, notwithstanding
Damnit I goanna say, the Black Woman Is the Holy Grail!
My point is that "God is A Black Woman"
The Black Egyptians knew this in ancient times scroll parchments and
papyrus
Anyway, broham, i like your writing style because it is highly creative and fluid.
Still, I see color, tone, and voice in your vocabulary choices
good poetry is a good and simple story telling method
So, you know what to do
Just don't fake but tell the truth!
Goin get yourself a plate of baby back ribs and a big mayonnaise jar of Kool-Aid
chief, I am outtie!

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Indeed, what is grace, but following the ordered steps, placed by God and everything will be ok.

God is real as real can get but we must obey His will.

...and if we do...God says, my good obedient, and faithful servant, well done!

Go head broham, I think you've got God's Plan!

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