Belleta's comments

I’ll me plaît beaucoup ce poème et qui mieux est, m’inspire. Merci de l’avoir partagé.

Return to your “Smart Hungry Candy” poem to get out of the doldrums. It’s a beautiful poem. You have a great talent that should sustain you.

I really like this poem, it gives me hope and a sense that hope is so much more than that.

My favorite line in this poem is, “Where total liberation from this stranger drinking life out of many lives will come.” It is so beautiful, so poetic, screams pathos because drinking implies living. I love the irony in it’s well. more »

This time I was in agreement with only some of the corrections.

This incident happened today and I was inspired to write a poem about it because I was so miffed that I had spilled some of it.

Helpful.