Ging Alburo D.

You Are My Best Friend (Poem 525_

Hi Everyone! This is Ging not so tall and not so short. I came from a big family of Ten and I am the last fruit of my parents love on the first set of seven siblings. My family describe me as friendly, lively, lovely and poetic and funny; this is when I was at home in my native land and speak my ow…






God gave you to me
A friend of proven worth
A trust we create in our heart
A precious treasure in our life.
I am thankful for the precious gift,
Of friendship that grow so deep;
Tho acquaintances are plentiful
It's hard to find a good friendship after all.:)

By Ms. Ging

05-15-13

Please let me know which one is better
The first or the second below?

 God gave you to me
A friend of proven worth
A trust we create in our heart
A precious treasure in our life.
I am thankful for the precious gift,
Of friendship that grow so deep;
Tho acquaintances are plentiful
It's hard to find a friendship just like yours.

Looking forward to your comment.
Please vote which you prefer.:) TY

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