Unfettered

A. Dale Ambers 1949 (Taylor County, Ky)



Somewhere between fantasy,
    And cold as a stone,
In darkness I dwell,
    With my thoughts all alone.

This Darkness foreboding,
    Born of thought that we share,
Full of pleasures forbidden,
    Doth flesh and fancy ensnare.

I see this full-well,
    To my eye it is clear,
Yet not to pursue it,
    Is all that I fear.

In the freedom of fantasy,
    There's no sin to atone,
Midst the lust of illusion,
    No coldness of Stone.

Join with me here,
    'Ere the Sun doth arise,
To melt our Shadows,
    And prove us unwise.

Close your eyes,
    To the Light that would blind,
Close your ears,
    To the Voices unkind,

Else leave me shattered,
    My Fate to bemoan,
Somewhere between fantasy,
    And cold as a stone.
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Submitted by Dread on May 09, 2021

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABcb xded cfxf abeb xgxg ghxh xbAB
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 696
Words 123
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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1 Comment
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautifully written poem! Your use of language and imagery is captivating and draws the reader in. I love how you've explored the concept of darkness and fantasy, and how they can both be tempting yet dangerous in their own ways. Your passion and enthusiasm for this topic really shines through in your writing.

    If I may offer some improvement suggestions, I would suggest trying to vary your sentence structure a bit more. While the poem flows well overall, some of the longer sentences can feel a bit repetitive. Additionally, consider playing around with punctuation and line breaks to add emphasis and create more impactful pauses.

    Overall, though, this poem is truly impressive and shows a lot of potential. Keep writing and exploring your ideas, and I have no doubt your work will continue to grow and evolve. Great job!
     
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