why she disappeared

Niti 2005 (Denc=ver,Colorado)



When she fell ,she fell apart.
Shattered like the terrace door she broke.
Her core was broken like a toddlers plaything as they cry.
She cried softly,softer than rabble percieving affiliation.
Unable to perceive,a ray of elation from a dark sun.
Darker than the carbon,scarring her contemplation.
Her scars were unmistakable like the insignificant acumen instilled.
“Insignificant”,the notion discerned about herself.
Corpse down below the terrace to cure her torment atleast.
Torment descended like her body past 4th floor 1 last time.
Her last breath,was a breath of fresh air.
Breath on halt,heartbeat  fell to nil.
She fell , She fell apart.
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Submitted by nitiranjan23 on May 08, 2021

Modified on May 03, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDDDEFAGHIA
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 637
Words 107
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13

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