Lost Soul

Nifty Nangor 2003 (Langtang North)



There's something in me I don't understand
Not clear about but it seems it's weighing me down
Starring an empty place that I've been doing till dawn

No one to talk to or find a remedy of my problem from
Just me, myself and I
What is this thing?

Uhmm!What's this feeling?
Huh!I mean what's this thinking?
Sad!I'm just asking questions I won't find answers to

No one care about how I feel
You're just left to bleed to death
After that,it's when you have haters that pretend to love you

"We grew up together and attended the same college
He have been a true friend from the onset
How I wish he was here"
Idiotic claims and pretends of love and care

Here I am breathing the air of life but deep down me I am death and gone
Things just don't seems the way it should be,nor seems to know me
Sadness all over me as I write this

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Submitted by ValidVibes on May 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXA XXB BBC XXC XXXX AXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 818
Words 168
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 4, 3

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