A visit to Paradise



A visit to Paradise
Was astonished to see beauty of Paradise
Lush Green Gardens which I can't describe
Streams of milk & honey was running beside
If deeds are good we can get in with all pride

Being 1st stage of Paradise was full of delight
Next step was to see angels to further apprise
They took me there to meet people in Paradise
They all were praying were no worldly desires

Some were in detention for their minor sins
Some were waiting for God's Mercy to come in
Salvation prayers, help further to cleanse the sins
And they get elevated to upper level to rise high

Is a unique process of God to be one with Him
Is wonderful process which we can not imagine
Folk always forgive those who are not here in
This paves the way to be in Paradise with no sin!
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Submitted by Amirul on May 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXBB XXAX CDCX XXDD
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 746
Words 146
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4

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