Blessing's or Burden's?



When good versus evil,
I've Learned the bad always wins.
Staying true and humble gets you kicked while your down & knocked down, under an over again.
Cant Reach success carrying morals, Weighing you down stressed,
piling up and in.
Might be Blessed by a heavy burden, But Your own Righteousness becomes what buries you in the end!
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Submitted by kaydorable93 on April 29, 2021

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Kaylee Dorsey

Raised to know right from wrong. And to not let others effect my morals and compromise me doing what I know is right. I was also raised by my Grandmother who was a retired police officer. As a living example she always did what she believed was right regardless of what others thought or tried to say. She was very Honest, Fair and Loving even with strangers. Past March She Died at 70yrs old. For the past 4yrs or so she mostly spent dealing with pain and suffering with her health. Considering shes the best woman iv ever known she deserved to enjoy more of life then end it in so much suffering. And even after she passed she had no justice with none of funeral wishes honored it was hard to understand. turning an optimistic person into a semi-pessimist i see so many less deserving people doing wrong by others and yet living happily and healthy. An then i look at those that try and live honest and be fair and how they seem to face more hardships or repeatedly knocked down and it makes me think.... My name is Kaylee I'm 28 and life is honestly hard I'm starting to realize being a good person might be the burden that buries you and sin prevails in the end. And after 28 yrs life isn't what I always thought and bitterness is setting in. more…

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