Lost You



Everything reminds of us;
The missing me and the lost you
Our kisses and cuddles, also
My broken promises.

Why did I miss you?
Even when I regret it
Broken loyalty and trust
Can't I fix them?
Can't I undo it?

Why past hurts?
Why nothing works?
Why the guilty me
Never takes a break?

My heart is in pieces 'cause
I broke yours.
I couldn't sleep 'cause,
I never let you did that.

Cure the broken me,
I can cure yours.
I counted on you,
And you never turned up.
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Submitted by Avonlea3 on April 28, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

28 sec read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXX ABXXB XXCX DEDX CEAX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 451
Words 91
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 4, 4, 4

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