Closer still



Somewhere close I sense a peace
A river flowing
Should sound ever cease.
Seemly closer now I sense a time
An ominous thought
Is it yours or is it mine?

Beneath a blanket, to shroud a head
A beating heart has nothing said
A sliver of moon ascends the deep
A whispering wind, for a soul to keep
Tonight

Somewhere close I sense a peace
A river flowing
Should sound ever cease.
Seemly closer now I sense the time
The ominous thought
It must be mine.
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Submitted by TobinRichardson. on April 26, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

25 sec read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAcde ffggx ABAcde
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 429
Words 86
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 6

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