This would be Home, But???



When I entered I felt warmth of Christmas morning
Or the crisp of the morning air on a breezy and beautiful day
If I seen the clouds, piled upon each other like blankets of fluff
Sitting by a fire all warm and stuff
Waking to the birds chirping such a gorgeous song
I could have stayed forever, but I feel so alone
In this dwelling you call home
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Submitted by mikeldurst1984 on April 24, 2021

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Scheme ABCCDEF
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 342
Words 68
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7

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