"My favourite incomplete wish"

DEVANSH MAHAJAN 2003 (New Delhi)



"FAVORITE INCOMPLETE WISH"

After all this time,
I wonder, where I was wrong?

 And sometimes I punch myself,
For taking so long.

To realize that the only thing,
We will be is 'Apart'.

I find myself in this darkness,
Singing the Melancholy of my Heart.

Neither was there any love,
 Nor any care.

Fate left me in this bottomless pit,
To Cry, Weep and live in Despair.

 I say this loud and clear,
It won't bring us anywhere.

 This loveless bond, these careless thoughts,
That you experience ever so Naked and Bare.

Maybe we weren't,
meant to be the Best.

Maybe you will find Love,
In someone else’s Nest.

But when you do cry and try to find,
Someone else like me in times of chaos.

You will realise & regret your actions,
And remember the guardian angel you have now lost.

This unfulfilled wish I keep inside,
That you and I will be One.

Lock our souls in this endless loop,
 And prove our bond is second to none.

But Destiny is cruel to us,
Ripping us in pieces,

Rendering us unable to experience,
Those sweet hugs and kisses,

That we would have had,
When you would feel down,

And on your head, my queen, I will set your crown,
To bring a smile and remove that frown.

Us being together, is my soul's Bliss.
But this, I am Afraid, will forever be,
 
My FAVORITE INCOMPLETE WISH
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Submitted on April 21, 2021

Modified on May 01, 2023

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Scheme A XB XB XC DC EF XF XF XF XG EG XX XX XH XH DI XI XJ JJ XX A
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,265
Words 239
Stanzas 21
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1

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