~~~Shards~~~

Jennifer DeLong 1973 (Marysville)



The intensity with which we shatter
Those what’s-left-of-us shards that cut you deep
Brokenness and jagged edges
When prices paid with pieces feels too steep

Only two things cause our own destruction
We’re broken from without or from within
The damage goes beyond reconstruction
We can’t build what we built before again

Cracked into piles of debris on the floor
The remnants of escaped emotion’s cage
Whose seething burn couldn’t take it anymore
Disposing of it disrespects its rage

We’re broken so that something is released
Those shards remind us what we have to do
To put them back is just what matters least
But don’t cut yourself making something new. ....
© Jennifer L DeLong 2/20/20
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Submitted by norwegianrhinowitch on April 14, 2021

Modified by acronimous on December 09, 2021

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA BXBX CDCD EFEFX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 710
Words 121
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 5

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  • ronnifox
    I like the poem, even though it is kind of depressing. You bring the feelings of the poem to life. Good job.
    LikeReply2 years ago

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