As it goes down

Sean^45 2000 (Limpopo)



Trees casting shadows,
horizon becomes less visible,
Tears fill pillow cases
Nocturnal creatures rise

You stand alone with a look,
An alluring look that draws me in
As I open the door I gaze at thy face
Sweetness fills my mouth I want to share

The dryness in my lips gives me a mission,
To taste yours as you do mine,
To drown in the fantasy world you rule
I want to be in that forever eternity

As the dawn draws near,
You still weary of that lust
The treasure becomes an apple
One in your lips
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Submitted by ts.31348 on April 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXX XXXX XXXX XXAX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 484
Words 97
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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