Can't Picture Me Without You

John Mccullough 1968 (Philadelphia)



Can't Picture Me Without You

So long ago I felt all alone.
No one saw my tears fallen.
Always smiling but really dying inside.
But then there was you.
You came without warning like christmas.
Sweet as grandma chocolate fudge.
Strong as a Chicago winds.
As I looked at you.
I seen my future wife.
I see a woman,my friend,and my lover.
You really are my soulmate.
I cant picture me without you.
That would the worst fatality.
No medication could cure that infection.
So I'm willing to stay.
Right by your side.
I give you my life.
I luv you boo
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Submitted on April 07, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A XBCAXXXADXCAXBXCDA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 524
Words 104
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 18

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